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EDIT 2: The date was on the back of the Before picture. Apparently, it was drawn on December 27, 2010. ouo''
Edit: Forgot the link to the original meme. Here /throws [link]

AAAAAAAAAY.

It's been a while since I've uploaded a deviation, so here, take this meme- /throws

The first picture is one you've never seen before. Why, you ask? Because after I started getting better, I thought it was terrible OTL.

That right there, my friends, is my very first manga drawing. EVER. It's fanart from the CLAMP anime/manga series Cardcaptor Sakura. I spent so much time on that xP...

Well, let's see how I did, then!

:bulletblack: My proportions have changed dramatically since my first drawing. Still not 100% or pro-level, but it's getting there.
:bulletblack: I used to only have one option for drawing - traditional. In the year since, I've not only gotten a tablet, but I've drawn digitally ( using MS Paint at first, but now it's Corel Paint Essentials )
:bulletblack: Dem eyes...the first ones are terrible...'nuff said.
:bulletblack: The first picture has no hands. LOL. The second one does, although they're still terrible hands...xP
:bulletblack: Picture quality. I know I can't compare the two, since one wasn't taken by a camera, but yeah.
:bulletblack: Noses. The first one has no nose xD The second one has a shadow where the nose is supposed to be. I'll work on it.
:bulletblack: My signature. The first one ( originally written in pencil but I wrote over it ) is just an E with a heart. The second one is my full name with a heart over the 'i' in my last name.
:bulletblack: Backgrounds. LOL there's not much to compare, both of them are just scribbles. But the newer one is prettier. :) I only got that result thanks to layering.
:bulletblack: Shading. I was never really good with shading using a pencil, but since I draw digitally now, it makes it look better with nice shading :D I'm not 100% with shading, but I'm also working on it.

....you know, I forgot the gloves on the second one ( YES THAT'S WHAT THEY WERE ON THE FIRST ONE LOL ). Oh well, I do not feel like drawing anymore today....aaah, I'm schleepy...I've been feeling weird all week, it was hard enough forcing this drawing outta me xD...my artistic creativity is dying down and I'm sad D:

I won't be able to draw as much as before, since high school starts next week ( NOOOOOOOO ) so I'll try to spam you with art until then. When the school year starts, expect doodles.

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PLEEEEEASE critique this, or at least leave a comment telling me how much I've changed! I want to get even better!

Thankies,
Emmy/Codename-YYJVMB
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:iconlulutsfactory:
Good pogress
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:iconyyjvmb:
=yyjvmb Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much! :meow:
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:iconlulutsfactory:
you'r welcome! x)
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*I-Madman Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like your original posing better, however your improvement is apparent! Your style has changed from a chibi-eske for a more human one and you have changed mediums. It's hard to compare pictures though when you use two different mediums. :/ Good luck and keep moving!
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=yyjvmb Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, thank you!
And yeah, I should've thought of that first, but the quality would've been terrible and my traditional drawings suck now..OTL
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*PlatypusCrazy98 Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The only thing that could've made it better was if you added color. I mean, I like black and white but some color would've been nice, but that's just me and my obsession with colors. :)

Although, the original was really cute. The newer one is prettier, but I still like the original. I also like the original's background better. More complete. Call me weird, I dunno, it's just a personal preferrence.

Altogether, really nice. :)
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=yyjvmb Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was trying to make it resemble the first one :)

You like the original better..?
OTL I'm a fail artist XP
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*PlatypusCrazy98 Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Right, and it's your decision. I just loove color.

No, I like the original's background better.
No you're not, why you say such things?!
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=yyjvmb Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
.....PFFT HER STAFF ISN'T THAT LONG--/spazz

But you said the original was cutesier...'The newer one is prettier, but i still like the original'.
And to be honest, the first background was just as half-butted as the second one. It was just harder to do since I couldn't get behind her.

I AAAAAM.
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*PlatypusCrazy98 Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
CALM YO SELF! :iconslapplz:

Meaning, I thought the original was cute. It may not have been the best drawing ever but it was cute. The new one is a lot more proportional and elegantly drawn.

I love pencil scribble that's why I like it better.

Then why do you draw and upload if you think you're so terrible?
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